Saturday, 7 January 2012

Xenogamy

Before: I didn’t know
the walk of shame,
three-hour brunches,
reefer jackets, Manners
or life-long friends.

Mine: a peculiar contingent
intersection in a
small universe overlooking
intricate infinite complexes
of puppeteers’ talking-doll strings.

Hers: a deep ineffable nest
of myriad relationships embedded
in a densely packed
palimpsestuous village.

Now: a compromised castle
on my side of the river
and her side of the tracks.

3 comments:

Karen said...

I've read your poems and liked them!!! My writing for websites has to use words that a year 7 student would understand... you use lots of amazing words that don't fit this criteria...

"palimpsestuous" is an example... cool!!!!

Cameron Mann said...

Yeah. The wordiness. A lot of it here is about artistic/intellectual tensions. As in:

"An intellectual says a simple thing in a hard way. An artist says a hard thing in a simple way." - Charles Bukowski

Penni Russon said...

I think I missed this one, I really like it. Very relatable.